Recreational Onslaught, would you comment please?

Excellent poem, maybe your fullest. Coconuts protect when in sun-tan-oil. Knots are nautical. Could be of a monk. If you thought of so many combinations, you are a very smart pal. An African child was on an icon only. Grimace mountain line : Very good. I am an Olympian Hermes interpreting verses. I stop here. I may come back later, to revise. I am not a ruthless mountain line eternity, only a bygone traveler of life's grimacing irony.